Teen Poetry #8 |
true love never dies |
I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
My heart races every time you take a pace I smile every time i see your face You give me that feeling inside That you'll always be there by my side There cannot be anybody like you Without you my world would be blue There is that saying that true love never dies Well i can see that in your eyes I am a puzzle, and your my final piece Someone my heart just couldn't release Your the one who makes me complete I love that feeling when our eyes meet Please don't go, I'd know I'd miss ya Because you are mine, i love you Carissa well this is obviously a love poem,my girlfriend means the world to me , hope you liked it comment,rate,appreciate |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Hoooooooollllllllyy!.....that was even better than the last one of ur's that I read! Love this poem, super duper job! library {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#} |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
This is awesome... How i feel about Andrew.. love it hunni... xx |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Awww! I Love the poem! Hope you and Carissa last forever.. hehe.. -Zach I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP |
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