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I am the arch angel
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0 posted 2008-10-16 02:13 AM


hey everyone i haven't written in forever(i'm rusty)...... but i was talking to someone special over voice chat and msn....and she reminded me how special she  is too me
i have much love and respect for you jess, my favorite native aussie *wink*, your special too me
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i was vulnerable and alone
but i wasn't, i was shown
you stick with me till the end of time
you brought me up from dirt and grime
you never lie, never gave up
gave me advice that saved my butt
she is determined and has a good head
she is crazy but I'll love her till I'm dead
i can't think of how to repay her now
can't believe it, she deserves a bow
she is amazing to me especially
she even has a baby on the way
if you ask if she's special, i say yes
you bet she is, truely amazing, my jess

i love you lots jess, you are truely amazing............ much love....keagan


  

If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving

© Copyright 2008 Keagan lear - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-10-16 08:39 AM


Awwww! Great poem Keagan!

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

RevengeIsMine
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2 posted 2008-10-16 11:33 AM


OMG.. u made me cry.. Aww Keagan.. I adore u right back.. Its amazing.. Love u Always *My American Speakin Friend*

P.S my aussie accent isn't that bad i hope! lolz..

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2008-10-16 06:15 PM


awww o cute guys!!!! Aussies deffinatly have the greatest accent in the world, and I've heard a fair share. But I guess that's what happens when you visit every place of importance in the Nation. Lol.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
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4 posted 2008-10-16 07:14 PM


I second the above motion.
GO AUSSIES GO!!

OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!!

shattered-smiles
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inside the shadows
5 posted 2008-10-17 08:14 AM


This is a really good poem Keagan..  And Jess, you should be happy that you have a friend like Keagan..

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07
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6 posted 2008-10-23 04:40 AM


this is nice... i agree to all of them

~~*K. B.*~~

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