Point of no return (short and simple)

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Point of no return (short and simple)

jayjara
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since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

0 posted 2007-06-24 09:39 PM

Many the people will dance,
many the people will tear.
And if you could hear snares fly,
the clash of cymbals,
the burst of flames that bleed
out of he
who speaks of a world
unreal that shows no desire to burn;
then you shall listen when he says
that everyday is the point of no return

-J

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-06-24 09:44 PM

very nice.

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-06-26 07:17 PM

it was perfect if you had made it longer i don't think it owuld have worked

Gifted
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since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

3 posted 2007-06-26 07:26 PM

Wow, I got a lot of feeling and emotion from this poem. It's like I could feel the fire that you were talking about. Very nice.

jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

4 posted 2007-06-26 08:23 PM

Thank you, that's what i was going 4

-J

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