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Teen Poetry #8

Being This Girl

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-10-08 08:26 PM

I wrote this to my dad. Let me know what you think.

Being this girl:

Fifteen years old,
And I've yet to earn your praise.
Your words are sharp,
And hurt in so many ways.

I've yet to hear a compliment,
Or receive words of love,
And no matter how I try,
My best is not enough.

It's impossible to make you proud,
Or to gain your respect,
And I'm slowly giving up,
Well, what did you expect?

Dad I know that I'm not perfect,
Nor do I wish to be,
But being this girl is difficult,
When you disapprove of what you see.

Love_Skull
Junior Member

since 2008-07-15

Posts 44

1 posted 2008-10-08 08:46 PM

wow, that was an awesome poem! im sorry about your issues with your dad, i hope theyll get better!

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