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I heard there's tears you cry
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I heard there's tears you cry |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I heard there's tears you cry I see the pain inside I know it's all my fault I'm the cause of it all I know your tears Are bigger than mine I know your fears Are harder to find You hide both, deep inside For no one to see I wasn't in the right To set them free I heard I caused you pain Just to see what I gained A calmness of mind Through a definite time I know what happened I took back a word I can't change our feelings, again I know that it hurt I can't take away, what I feel All I can do is run From all that felt so real What I've left undone I heard there's tears you cry I see the love I hide Just to save my life Though it doesn't seem right Live in the present but don't forget the future |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I'm gonna be honest with ya Christine.. I didn't really like this poem.. I don't know why but it doesn't really catch me interesting.. But just because it doesn't catch my interest doesn't mean its good. I liked your rhyming in this poem.  Keep up the writing!-Zach "I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!" |
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