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0 posted 2008-10-01 10:30 PM


Do you hear the whispers
Telling you it’s not right
Like the shadows
Afraid of the light
They have no business
Within the sun’s sight

Do you feel what pulls you
A tug here and there
Like the wind
It doesn’t care
It takes you where it wants
No matter if it’s fair

Do you see the falling tears
The moment they fall
Like the rain
It doesn’t stop at all
It just keeps going
No matter what it may stall

Do you taste the pain
Rushing inside
Like a violent current
From which you can’t hide
It’s coming either way
But soon it’ll subside

Do you long for peace
To hold on to
Like the sunshine
Glistening on you
After the rain says goodbye
And you say adieu!



Live in the present but don't forget the future

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1 posted 2008-10-02 07:57 AM


Wow Christine! This is really really good. I feel your pain.. I saw that it sorta related to use in our "situation" like thing.. if you know what I mean.. Hope you and me find happiness and be able to walk in the sunlight.

(Library)

Zach-

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

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