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I am the arch angel
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0 posted 2008-09-23 11:58 PM



i found a secret chest,it is the chest to my heart
i'm quite worried because it is falling apart

drawn by attention, rejected by design
free me from this world divine

i can't feel myself anymore
you turned and won't look at me anymore

i know you feel that your too good for me
why don't  you just give me a chance to redeem

i miss your warm hearted smile
you couldn't miss it for a mile

overwhelmed and beaten
just  destroy me my demon

i found a secret chest, it is the chest to my heart
if only you knew, that you were the key
the key to my heart...


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1 posted 2008-09-24 03:24 AM


Aww this is gawjus.. just like u!!!
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2 posted 2008-09-24 06:26 PM


Wow Keagan.. I'm speechless.. This poem is just what i wanted to read at the moment.

-Zach

freeand2sexy
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3 posted 2008-09-24 09:58 PM


Incredible! I LOVED IT!!!

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