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The real you
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The real you |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
You joke with me and tell me supposed truths. Words you expect me to believe cause it comes from you. But you call me names and try to order me around and if anyone else is there, no decency to be found. I do not know what is up with your attitude. You try to take me down and act really rude. As soon as we are alone you are sweet and real. Actually making me believe you know how I feel. In front of people you want to impress, you are so fake. A blind man could see it, whom are you trying to bait? You try to tear my friendships and break peoples hearts. Telling gossip about one, isolating us even more apart. Anything we say, you tell the first person to ask. When we first met, I like you because you were sweet and true. Let me know when that girl I met gets back. When you are genuine, tell me how to get a hold of the girl I thought I knew |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
Oh my god! wow .. I really liked this poem and can definatley relate to it. Describing similar emotions to something that I went through not long ago with one of my ..old.. friends. Love it  Look forward to reading more Belinda~x |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
sent it to her and hope she will take the hint |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
very nice rhia ending lines were amazing well put together... hunnie A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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quanasia-poetry New Member
since 2006-11-05
Posts 3GA,USA |
i loved it i understand what u mean and where u are coming from |
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