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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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0 posted 2008-09-16 10:26 PM


Swift Arrow Rose
(How Beautiful You Are)

Show me how to show you
How beautiful you are
Let me say I know you
Feel the light off of your star

Give me just one little tiny hint
Show me you know who you are
Your face with the rose colored tint
Your eye a glorious star

How could it be?
I in indignation sigh
You must know what I see
How you could so fly

Dance with me darling
See now through my eyes
Sing with me darling
Turn your face to the skies

Don't believe Everything you Think

© Copyright 2008 Frank Robertson - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
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1 posted 2008-09-17 03:31 AM


Amazing as per usual.. such talented words..
Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
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Space Camp, IN
2 posted 2008-09-17 08:39 AM


nice. liked this one a lot man good job.
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-09-18 08:21 PM


Thanks Guys!

Don't believe Everything you Think

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