The blue eyed angel who loved ketchup

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Teen Poetry #8

The blue eyed angel who loved ketchup

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

0 posted 2006-10-30 06:14 AM

Hello it's Belinda,
Can you hear me? I'm here!
Perhaps you'd hear better,
If you weren't hidden up your own rear!

You strut around the place,
With you nose held high.
Nobody is to you standards,
So they needn't try.

I wander if you are aware,
Of poverty and pain.
Does your utter naievety,
Not drive you insane?

You think your clothes,
Get you a reaction.
But all the boys want of you,
Is a piece of the action.

If you where an object,
You would probably be a trophy.
Something that is everyones,
Someone who is nobody.

Sophie get a life,
Stop trying the american dream,
You learnt long ago,
Nothing is ever how it seems.

Your family life is crap,
Your only friends are fake.
Who is this bimbo,
You are trying to create?

What happened to the old Sophie,
That inoccent little girl.
The blue eyed angel who loved ketchup,
With a pink wrinkled nose and blonde curls.

The saddest part of this rhyme,
Is that this girl is real.
Her name is no Sophie,
But this is the way she feels.

She's sick of this other person,
The one she is trying to be.
In the core she is tired and hurt,
The girl I am describing is me ...

Belinda Black

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-10-30 07:07 AM

DAMN THAT WAS BETTER THAN SEX!!! LOL

This is the only life you have, so live it to be remembered

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

2 posted 2006-10-30 07:26 AM

ohh arghh !! hehe .. well... thanks I think.. lol.

Belinda~x

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

3 posted 2006-10-30 10:03 AM

This was really good, can totally relate.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2006-11-03 12:36 PM

wow that was amazing it had a nice flow and it seemed to float above leaving time to really think. i'd have to agree with tempest but... what a thing to say

hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

5 posted 2006-11-05 06:03 AM

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it .. anything to change?

Belinda~x

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