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Teen Poetry #8

let this one die

yvetters_24
Member

since 2006-08-27

Posts 52
california

0 posted 2008-09-07 08:15 PM

You say jump I don’t ask why
I ask for help but you never have time
Is this what our friendship has come to be
It seems like its just me and me
And it does hurt to feel this way
But it hurts twice as much to know that everyone can see what I’m to afraid to say
you put everything before me
And I put you before all my needs

And
Its time to get out
I got to get out
But I just don’t know how
gotta let a piece of me die
gotta stop living a damn lie

But Its just so hard to let you go

I once dared to call you my best friend
But knew all along how that would end
Ill always be here to reminded you not to forget to remember me
Now my eyes tear up and I cant see
O how I wish this friendship had never come to be

And
Its time to get out
I got to get out
But I just don’t know how
gotta let a piece of me die
Gotta stop living this damn lie

But Its just so hard to let you go

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

1 posted 2008-09-14 10:36 AM

Wow, I really enjoyed this. I completely understand the "one sided friendship." Have you tried telling this person how you felt? I know sometimes with selfish people they don't even realize what they are doing.

I am the same way you are- I give my all and often receive nothing for it. It's so difficult.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

2 posted 2008-09-15 12:58 PM

I dont know what i liked best. It was really good. But i agree, one sided freindships and one sided love is not good.

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