Teen Poetry #8 |
True friend |
rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
DEDicated to Rasa and eve A kind of species prepared to listen to endless nonsense. The person who can even tell you what you meant. Who is not afraid to tell you the truth, empty of lies. Giving you the whole before you hear it from someone else. Bravely defending you against any odds. Willing to take your side, even if you are wrong. Whose confidence surges into your sinking heart. Keeping you strong from a distance far apart. Catching your stumble, picking you up again. Recreating your smile slightly damp from the rain. The one who gives you random hugs because they love you. Ready to hold your hand to help you get through. A silence with them is never awkward, it a quiet. Break in time. Sharing the base of friendship, just a little peace of mind. The most pure type of person, who will be there for you till the end. Covered in beauty, full of angelic sweet ness, a precious rare Friend. |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
This a very well written poem. You should enter the best friend challenge. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I did but I am writing something else for that. |
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MixedChica Junior Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 34 |
Rhia you truley are a wonderful friend. this brought tears to my eyes. I miss you and i don't deserve a friend as great as you. I love you with all my heart |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Glad you liked. I hope i get to see you chica when i fly home over break. If someone will hav a sleepover I can see all of you. LUv to u too. |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
i LOVED this you described a true friend really well and this is totally going in my library "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
what this about contest "When you find that you have found yourself, you find that you won't have to look for much else." -Amanda Ann |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
the friends challenge was around awhile ago. |
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