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Teen Poetry #8

A bitter child's tears

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-08-23 11:05 PM

Walking through memories
Looking at the young child cry.
His pain is surging like a tidal wave
Why did such a child listen to the lies?

His bottle up pain.
Sanity smothering it all.
Trying to hold on to what's left of this child.
Although he hears the distant call.

It calls out his name.
A siren at her worst.
Pain ready to escape.
Too much to hold this curse.

But sanity takes control.
Powerful but still weak..
Its been captive way to long
No power can keep it bleak.

I can't finish this poem... Sorry guys.. Yea hI know the poem sucks.. I don't like it myself....

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-08-24 03:22 PM

Well I liked it. I was gunna say it was one of your best except for a few gramatical errors (haha I like that word), but whatever....Great job anyway.