Live Like You Were Dying, The Wordspinner Journey... (Inspired By Keagan)

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Teen Poetry #8

Live Like You Were Dying, The Wordspinner Journey... (Inspired By Keagan)

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-08-22 10:01 PM

Dedicated To Keagan (I_am_The_Arch_Angel), Who recently reminded me to live like we were dying!

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Excuse me young lady,she stands to say
I don’t think you want it to end this way
Running for miles just to stand still
I’m sorry miss but you’ve got shoes to fill

What happened to the girl I once adored
I’ll tell you what happened I got bored
You used to be so god darn polite
But the girl you’ve become just isn’t right

But underneath it all you’ll find a piece of me
The broken silhouette of who I used to be
The tainted shadow of the Aussie sinner
The one and only “Word Spinner”

Your undesirable tea parties with scones jam and cream
You may be my grandma but have you heard me scream
Stop with the guilt because it’s all a lie
Only the good die young, so I doubt I’ll die

Here we go again with this pitiful rhyme
I’ll scream a little louder for you all next time
Un-button the top and show a lil breast
Hitch up the skirt and well you get the rest

So stop trying to find the real me because this is it
And as for those shoe’s I’ll be dammed if they fit
What happened you say, I finally stopped crying?
It's about time i started to live like i was dying!

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-08-22 10:06 PM

ooh I'm not sure what I think about this. It's a magnificently written poem!

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

2 posted 2008-08-22 10:09 PM

Yay, i am an inspiration! thanks jess! i like this.....quite hard to understand a bit but i like it

If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2008-08-22 10:17 PM

Thanks guys.. i get that its hard to understand.. i think it might need some work?

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2008-08-23 09:25 AM

i think its your masterpiece. i felt this. it was intense. every word beats out of the screen. its like a living thing as you read it. the words were just perfect.they flowed sooo good. and they were powerful. your body can feel the change of more than one emotion as it triggers them. its ones like this that keep me around.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

5 posted 2008-08-23 11:49 PM

Aww CO.. u know how to make a gal blush lol.. thanks hun..

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