Teen Poetry #8 |
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It Is You Who... |
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DeSi - BG Junior Member
since 2008-08-12
Posts 18BULGARIA |
It is you… It is you, who makes me wanna smille Who makes me wanna laugh… It is you, holding my hends while I am just about to fall… It is you, who keeps my soul Who keeps the whole of me above… It is you who makes me wanna go Finding what is like to love… It is you,who makes me stand up Who makes me wanna rise… It is you, only you…. That keeps me alive all the time… It is you, who makes me want to Want to go on, without slowing down… It is you who gives me strenght to Get my feet off the ground… It is you that makes me wanna fly Who gives me wings… It is you who makes me wanna touch the sky Inspie of everithing… |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
nice... really in love. keep posting. i enjoyed reading this ~~*Kaye B.*~~ |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
this is a really interesting piece. the wording was simple but very understandable. great job. waiting to see more ![]() ~*Julianna*~ |
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Love_Skull Junior Member
since 2008-07-15
Posts 44 |
great write! keep posting... ~Leah |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
I've gotta agree with JAFS (sorry for the shortening!) your poem was very simple, but it's simplistic flow worked very well. Welcome to Passions, and hope to see more! -Andrew There is power in the pen. |
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DeSi - BG Junior Member
since 2008-08-12
Posts 18BULGARIA |
Thanks to everione for the great replies (hug) ![]() |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Welcome to Passions. hope to read more soon. this poem was great.. i love it! Krysti |
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