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Teen Poetry #8

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Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-08-07 06:38 AM

What I would do to bring you back
For us to walk hand in hand
What would it take to bring you back
From that ever distant land
That magic word I would utter
Just to have you back with me
I would walk every single mile
I would swim through every sea
If counting every fallen tear
Could somehow bring you home
I would cry them all again
For never have I felt so alone
You taught me more than any teacher
You guided me through tough times
You were forever by my side
Through hatred, sadness, tears and lies
You were the glue that bound my life
My missing piece from every part
You were the light that shone from me
You were the keeper of my heart
To live a day without you
One where you were not there
Would not be one worth living
For I would have no care
But now that day has risen
And your piece of me has been stolen
It's now I realise what you ment to me
You mark on me has fallen
For surely it is clear to see
Without you, there is no me
What I would do to bring you back
Without you presence I am split in two
My dearest friend, you will rest in peace
Though I never will without you.

Once again, thanks for reading and commenting. =]

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-08-07 08:11 PM

OMG....wow. I'm flabergasted. Honestly. And the ending was magnificent. I can also add that I know exacally how you feel. Every single word I could relate to. There is no way I wont put this in my library. Amazing job, i'll be reading more.

{~~*~~}
ps. Welcome to pip...

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{~Emily~}

Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

2 posted 2008-08-08 10:20 AM

Thank you so much. I find it hard talking about stuff, so i find it easier to write it down. Glad you enjoyed it. =]

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