Teen Poetry #8 |
Behind His Smile |
HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Hey I'm back from vacation. I had a great time and it made me take my mind off of things but now that I'm back home things are back to the way they were. Behind His Smile: There are no monsters in the cupboards, Or hiding under the stairs, They aren't lurking in the shadows, Or underneath my bed. There are no ghosts out to get me, Or demons to cut off my head, There's no vampires out for my blood, Or witches that want me dead. There are no werewolves in the woods, Or goblins plotting my death, The grim reaper is not waiting, To steal me of my breath. The ghouls and goblins don't give me nightmares, And spiders don't keep me awake at night, I have something even worse, That fills my dreams with fright. Just a normal math teacher, With a very good disguise, But I have seen his real face, And that evil in his eyes. It's him that gives me nightmares, He's the reason I'm afraid, I try to run away from him, But there is no escape. He's my mother's husband, I am his child, And he's a perverted person, Behind that deceitful smile. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
This is really sad. But wonderfully written. Great job, still praying for ya! God Bless! ~*Julianna*~ |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
deep very deep lots of strong emotion and powerful words...and i think your lucky for getting to go to spain, i wanna go welcome back and keep on writing keagan If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving |
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hiddenIntheDark Junior Member
since 2008-08-27
Posts 20 |
Great poem with great emotion!!!!! so sad!! |
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racer-boy New Member
since 2008-08-31
Posts 9united states, tx |
that was an great write, and im sorry for wat your going through. keep ur head up, be positive, and live now live now |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
you really touched my heart ...and I am sorry about what is going on with you and this poem has alot of deep emotions THE PAIN OF LOVE |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Welcome back and i hope you had fun. I am always amazed by your poems. This one was really good, and the last part was unexspected. But still amazing. The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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