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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-08-05 10:30 AM


Hey I'm back from vacation. I had a great time and it made me take my mind off of things but now that I'm back home things are back to the way they were.

Behind His Smile:

There are no monsters in the cupboards,
Or hiding under the stairs,
They aren't lurking in the shadows,
Or underneath my bed.
There are no ghosts out to get me,
Or demons to cut off my head,
There's no vampires out for my blood,
Or witches that want me dead.
There are no werewolves in the woods,
Or goblins plotting my death,
The grim reaper is not waiting,
To steal me of my breath.

The ghouls and goblins don't give me nightmares,
And spiders don't keep me awake at night,
I have something even worse,
That fills my dreams with fright.

Just a normal math teacher,
With a very good disguise,
But I have seen his real face,
And that evil in his eyes.
It's him that gives me nightmares,
He's the reason I'm afraid,
I try to run away from him,
But there is no escape.
He's my mother's husband,
I am his child,
And he's a perverted person,
Behind that deceitful smile.

© Copyright 2008 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
1 posted 2008-08-05 03:14 PM


This is really sad. But wonderfully written. Great job, still praying for ya! God Bless!

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

I am the arch angel
Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA
2 posted 2008-08-06 12:53 PM


deep very deep   lots of strong emotion and powerful words...and i think your lucky for getting to go to spain, i wanna go   welcome back and keep on writing


keagan

If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving

hiddenIntheDark
Junior Member
since 2008-08-27
Posts 20

3 posted 2008-08-31 11:52 PM


Great poem with great emotion!!!!! so sad!!
racer-boy
New Member
since 2008-08-31
Posts 9
united states, tx
4 posted 2008-09-01 12:08 PM


that was an great write, and im sorry for wat your going through. keep ur head up, be positive, and live now

live now

Sara Mikael
Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34

5 posted 2008-09-14 03:47 PM


you really touched my heart ...and I am sorry about what is going on with you and this poem has alot of deep emotions

THE PAIN OF LOVE

Abbeon
Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
6 posted 2008-09-15 01:06 PM


Welcome back and i hope you had fun. I am always amazed by your poems. This one was really good, and the last part was unexspected. But still amazing.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

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