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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
Broken down by a shot heard across the room, Man shatters as he hits the final barrier. Crimson flood emerges out of the breathless crater. Glass shards scattered in the endless chaos. "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Dude, I gotta be honest. Your poem put these vivid images in my eyes, but I have no idea what I'm seeing... Strong imagery and words that can't compute any farther. There is power in the pen. |
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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
Well the poem is supposed to be an abstract perspective on the ruthlessness of murder, and how humanity has digressed into such great savagery that it has become such commonplace. |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Ohhhh! I think I understand a little better! ^^ Thanks! There is power in the pen. |
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