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Teen Poetry #8

Let me see what i wanna see, let me do what i wanna do

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-07-03 05:44 PM

Can i feel the fire thats burning on my inside?
The action of being lazy has died

I dream of the ocean waves
Feeling the happiness over the days

Watching the many stars at night
Have you ever seen such a wondrous sight?

Nothing you can say or do
Can stop what is supposed to come true

Asleep, I am dreaming of dreams
Whilst under the pressure nothing as it seems

I was born to do this i am the one
I will not quit until the task is done

If risking my life is something i must do
I will do it for braveness is what I've grew

I don't need any help I'll be fine
I must get up before i run out of time

So i must go, it is my duty
If i fail, please don't let them shoot me

If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-07-03 05:48 PM

This is really good sweetie, I love it. You're an amazing poet, you really are. I love all of your poems, including this one. Keep on writing and don't ever stop. Your work is one to put on display. Love you.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-07-03 07:06 PM

This is truely great Keagan, Your writing astounds (sp?)me evertime! I remember when you first started out writing and even then you were better then me! Hahaha! I agree with Tori. Keep it up! Don't stop writing.

~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

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