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Judging Me?
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Judging Me? |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Judging Me: Why are you looking at me? What did I ever do to you? Who are you to judge me? What's it got to do with you? Why are you judging me? What did I do so wrong? Who are you to sneer at me? What the hell is going on? And then that's when I realized, You weren't looking at me at all, You were all just looking through me, Simply staring at the wall. It's yourselves you have the problem with, How is it I did not see? You're too busy with your issues, To judge and stare at me. It's not really quiet, You're all screaming in your brain, Though outwardly we're different, Inside we are the same. That bully in the corner, He's not really so bad, He cares for his dying mother, And he's already lost his dad. That girl they call the slut, She's never even had sex, It's just a bunch of rumors, That have made her life a mess. Then there's that hot guy, Who struts about all day, The girls flock at his feet, Unaware that he is gay. And that girl that no-one knows, Has the potential to be a star, But with no friendly encouragement, She probably won't get far. They say that girl must cut her wrists, Because she's dressed all in black, But it's that blond-haired bimbo, Who self injures and attacks. That kid who's on the football team, The one who shaved his hair, That cancer's got a hold on him, Tomorrow he won't be there. And that boy's about to be a dad, But that girl won't tell him so, She'll go to the abortion clinic, And he will never know. You have your problems, And I have mine, But we don't see it, So all will be fine. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Wow, when you really pay attention it's crazy what you see. Library. Great job. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Great poem and it's so very true. When you look at a person, you don't know what's going on inside of them. They could seem like the happiest person alive but they cut themselves. A lot of people go through life looking at random people on the street and judging them by how they look on the outside. Hardly any people stop and try to find out what's on the inside. Great poem Hershey. TJ So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful... |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Wow, this is really good...and so true. A very very nice write. If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow.. this was like reality just slapped me in the face. lol.. I guess I just been asleep way to long to open my eyes to what really goes on.. Amazing write! Keep it up! ~Zach~ "And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion." |
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rockangel_gv Junior Member
since 2008-03-29
Posts 43 |
woooow, this is amazing! really good write  |
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