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Teen Poetry #8

Blind-Sided

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-07-03 12:47 PM

Somewhere inside
this delusion of our existence,
there’s a world
that lies just beyond our tentative reach.
It’s waiting there
for someone to find it,
to discover its meaning of vitality.
Some people pass through their days,
blinded against the beauty of this earth.
They can only perceive
the ideas that they have experienced.
To see the world,
to actually grasp its hidden meaning,
you need to explore the possibilities;
achieve the unachievable.
There’s a life out there
that has been clouded over
by the statistics
that people have taught you.
There’s an unknown world out there
that’s waiting for someone
to understand its realism.
Reach out,
take it by the hand
and make the impossible
possible.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

1 posted 2008-07-03 12:58 PM

very creative...great job! loved it

keagan

keep on keeping on--Joe Dirt

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2008-07-10 02:07 AM

"delusion of existence" and "clouded by statistics".
Simply amazing.

There is power in the pen.

Love_Skull
Junior Member

since 2008-07-15

Posts 44

3 posted 2008-07-22 01:42 AM

great job! i loved it!

Leah

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