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Teen Poetry #8

A step and then I'm gone

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

0 posted 2008-07-02 11:17 PM

She climb to a distance where everything feels surreal
Clutching to the mind she once had before she was set free

Clouds in the distance makes her wish away, to fly to a higher plane - free from all her pain

She looks down and see, not a single person who would stop me
A step and then I'm gone
Broken into pieces - not to ever sing another song

Both of our tears fall to hit the ground
As we are one and the same - a girl who can't do other than cry

Will a step be the answer to my call?

I will never know until I fall

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Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

1 posted 2008-07-03 11:51 AM

that was sad dont take the step i love your work, and your english is fine when it comes to poetry there is no right or wrong way. or at least i dont think so.

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