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Baby_Girl
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0 posted 2008-06-30 04:02 PM


This is more of a song so that is why there are so many unusual breaks that are not nessisary normally for just a poem. It sounds a little silly when you just read it but if you were to have me sing it, I think it would sound alot better.

You and Me

You and me.
Me and you.
Together we,
will be forever.

You and me.
Me and you.
we go together,
like two peas,
in a pod.

Take my hand.
Lead the way.
So you and me,
can be together.

Be with me.
Tell me you,
will always love me.

I promise you,
that I will be-,
here for you.

Baby_Girl

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1 posted 2008-06-30 04:19 PM


awww its so good too have you back it seems like all our old members are coming back to take a peek on here again such a sweet poem I really like it
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-06-30 05:14 PM


awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's so cute i tried to sing it but i jsut sounded silly lol

i'm lost and going nowhere

Baby_Girl
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3 posted 2008-06-30 06:48 PM


It is good to be back...I have been gone because I moved to a new town.

Baby~Girl

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