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You Had The World But You Dropped It
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You Had The World But You Dropped It |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
You Had the World but You Dropped It: Mr. Football Star With the shiny car Everyone knows Who you are The timer stops You run to the stands Everyones screaming Trying to touch your hands Girls run over Drop to your feet You turn your head And look straight at me My cheeks turn red I turn away You open your mouth Like you've got something to say Some blond runs over And grabs your waist Shes wearing lip gloss "You wanna taste?" I stand up to leave I walk up the stands But I stop in my tracks When I feel your hand Its on my shoulder I hear your voice So smooth and soft You leave me no choice I turn around Avoid your eyes Your finger's under my chin You make my head rise I see your face Your smiling huge You'd never guess What that smile can do Everyones yelling at you To get back on the field You block them out With your invisible shield Were all alone now At least in our minds Without saying anything You send me the signs Were rudely interrupted By some guy named Gerard You turn your head slowly And stare at him hard "If you don't get back down there, You're off the team" You shrug your shoulders Relieved, it seems You grab me by the waist And kiss me deep I lose my breath My knees go weak You take my hand And lead me away Everyones stares I don't know what to say I will never understand I will never really see Why you had the world But you dropped it for me. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
OMG.. wow.. reminds me of Cinderella story.. but an amazing write. well done |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Awe, this is beautiful. I love it. (library) {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
Gorgeous! I loved it! |
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broken_imperfection Junior Member
since 2008-06-27
Posts 15WV, USA |
This has got to be the most beautiful poem I've read on here. You've definately got talent lovely... -jen "Don't hit your kids. No, seriously, they have guns now." |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Wow this is amazing. Not the ending i expected at all... I really liked this  Nicely doneSo no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
this poem deserves once major "Awwwwwweeee" lol Because this is just so good!!! Great work!! But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil, |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
omg that was so cute!! i loved it. i'm lost and going nowhere |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
WOW!!! love this one of my favorites from you.. finally a happy poem Krysti |
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