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HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-06-25 09:13 AM

Daddy's Game:

She writes in anger
She writes in tears
She writes of her father
The only man she fears

She hear him coming
Today wasn't a good day
He storms through her door
And says "it's time to play"

He rips off her clothes
So his daughter is revealed
"I'll kill you if you scream"
"Then I promise, my lips are sealed"

She tunes out the world
Like every other night
She's afraid to say
"Daddy this isn't right"

She decides to stay silent
Because she remembers speaking up
In a hospital bed being forced to lie
Because Daddy's right beside her holding coffee in a cup

Released from the hospital
Shes in trouble now
Daddys come to get her
And forces her to bow

Shoves her straight through the door
Lands face first onto the floor
Daddy says "what's wrong"
"home is where you belong"

She begs, she pleads
But daddy has to feed
His sick need
And force his girl to bleed

He finished her for the night
She finally gets to rest
She cries her eyes out
with her knees to her chest

But daddy will be here
very soon
And Daddy's sick game
Will resume

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2008-06-25 10:49 AM

hard subject matter and very emotional.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-06-25 12:24 PM

I cannot reply to this, but must add it to my library. YOU MUST GET OUT!!!

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-06-25 11:25 PM

Danielle.. you gotta get out... really you and your brother dont belong there... but you are a really talented writer. you really amaze me
Krysti

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-06-26 10:10 PM

I agree with Earl and Krysti. you are an AMAZING wrtier but you just can't let yourself and your brother live like this. I wish you and Jake the best, and I'll pray for you.

{~~*~~}

Library.

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

5 posted 2008-06-27 01:15 AM

WOW... i've read every single one of your poems and although i don't comment i still read.. You've got to escape.. there isn't any other option.. and sometimes it the hardest things that hurt the most.. You remind me so much of myself when i first started.. traveling down a path in life n some how you picked the one with the most obsticles.. My advice too u is keep on breathing.. take one day at a time and things get better.. sometimes things get worse before they get better.. but you have the support of some amazing ppl here on PIP.. and i'm one of them..

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

6 posted 2008-06-27 08:15 PM

Yet another amazing poem. However, I strongly agree with everyone else, you must get out!!Keeping you and your brother in my prayers.

broken_imperfection
Junior Member

since 2008-06-27

Posts 15
WV, USA

7 posted 2008-06-28 01:35 AM

You're poems touch me deeply, after reading the first few lines i begin to cry a little.. be strong, and keep writing for it gives a slight bit of relief.. - jen

"Don't hit your kids. No, seriously, they have guns now."

broken_imperfection
Junior Member

since 2008-06-27

Posts 15
WV, USA

8 posted 2008-06-28 01:36 AM

You're poems touch me deeply, after reading the first few lines i begin to cry a little.. be strong, and keep writing for it gives a slight bit of relief.. - jen

"Don't hit your kids. No, seriously, they have guns now."

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