George W Bush (You Should Be Ashamed) Since They Killed The Other One

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Teen Poetry #8

George W Bush (You Should Be Ashamed) Since They Killed The Other One

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-06-23 10:16 PM

Well Well Well.. They pulled my original poem.. so here's another one.. once again these are my own unique views on this war and i'm not pushing them on anybody.. So here goes..

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The Name Of Shame

Another war,
Another mistake
Another soldier,
You’ll try to break

A guilty plea
Of a suicide bomber
Who died today
To defend his hounor

One last bullet,
The smell of blood
A dying soldier
Covered in mud

The sorrow call
Of a man in pain
Another person
You’ve put to shame

Take a look around
You’ve made your bed
The American idiot
Nothing more can be said

A deathly mistake
Another goodbye
Another Solider
I've watched die

Another attack
You couldn’t wait
Another dead soldier
From your home state

I’m Australian
And I’m just as ashamed
Take a look George Bush
I think you’ve been framed

There’s no terrorists
It was all in your head
Look at those soldiers
Half of them’s dead

A broken prayer
Another goodbye
A forgotten soldier
Who didn’t have to die

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

1 posted 2008-06-23 10:20 PM

remix......love it.... your welcome....and i better get a reply back on my next poem !!!!

keagan =P

keep on keeping on--Joe Dirt

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-06-23 10:21 PM

Lovely poem, Library of course.

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"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-06-23 10:45 PM

I liked this. Good write!

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2008-06-24 09:34 PM

oh wow I read the 1st one butt didnt have time to reply.. was thinking bout it lots and came back to reply.. butt then noticed a new one.. didnt think they would have pulled the last one.. hmm well love this.. great poem.. you are amazing

Krysti

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2008-06-24 10:46 PM

I pulled the last one because of the masked profanity. NOT for your political views and I said that in the email I sent you.

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