Teen Poetry #8 |
A Walk Through The Graveyard |
HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Depression is running through my head, These thoughts make me think of death, A darkness which blanks my mind, A walk through the graveyard, what can I find? Black shadows walk in between the graves, How many lives have not been saved? Six feet under if not more, How I’d like to go down and explore, The feeling of lying in a box, I can’t get out, is it locked? Is it day or is it night? Are birds singing or have bats taken to flight? I know one day this is where I’ll go, Am I afraid? I don’t think so! Will I be able to explore the feeling of death? After I’ve taken my last breath? Or will I be a shadow in between the graves? Will I know how many lives have not been saved? After this life is there another one? With a different moon and a different sun, I won’t go to hell as I’m already there, A place full of sadness, a place full of despair, So there’s nothing to live for, no future no past, So I might as well end it, end this life at last. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I don't know what to tell ya' Hershey.... This is a great poem... but I'm afraid the topic, of you taking your own life, I think goes against the rules....But this poem is going in to my Library.
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Yes, I'm afriad this may be taken off of teen. But it is a wonderful poem. Library. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I have nothing to say...be carful Hershey, know yourself, but rule yourself to. Suicide is not worth it. ps library Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics. |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
thanks all. Its just something running through my mind lately |
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