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kissmexbaby6605
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since 2008-01-23
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Georgia

0 posted 2008-06-04 01:17 AM


I'm laughing haveing a good time, something i haven't done in awhile
my friends & i are posing for a picture, gotta smile
i turn towards the door and everything stops
i feel my hands tighten and my stomachs all knots
the cool breeze touches my skin and my insides turn cold
at first it doesn't bother you, but it grows like a mold
it slowly turns you rotten over passinf time
it becomes nasty & builds up like grime
my bodys lost in the moment that won't pass
the when he stepped through the glass
his appearance burns my eyes to tears
his voice is the monster to my fears
granted i hide my emotions well
but there are so many things let to tell
he broke such a huge part of me
& thats something no one will ever see
all the bruises and scars are still across my heart
& sometimes i can't halp it but they make me fall apart
my friends say i'm so strong yet i struggle too
everytime i look into his eyes, they're soo blue
i fall a little, but no one sees
how my legs get shaky at the knees
"true love never dies, it just weakens over passing time"

© Copyright 2008 Kathryn - All Rights Reserved
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-06-04 11:46 AM


Beautiful. I know how you feel. Not fun.

Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics.
The earth is round, germs cause desease, and God speaks.

I am insane of course BUT STILL!!

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