Teen Poetry #8 |
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The Ruptured Truth Of A Sad Goodbye, Just Another Incomplete Lullabye.... |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia ![]() |
Do you see the tears that fall innocently from her eyes? Do you hear the sound of a broken lovers cries? It’s been fourteen weeks, six hours and thirty minutes since he drove away No matter how many tears she cried, he still refused to stay He packed his things in a cardboard box, left his wedding ring on the bed After all that they’d been through, it didn’t matter what she said At first it seemed surreal, she thought that he’d come home But a distant memory was erased the night she answered the phone She sat there for a little while, how could he do what he did Another broken promise gone, a new mother for their kid How do you start over when the past haunts all that you are? How do you tell a child that daddy’s new wife is in the car? How do you say goodbye to a little boy who is your own? How do you forgive the man who takes your only child from his home? A Broken lover’s prayers can be heard outside tonight They whistle in the wind in a hope to make things right. Tonight a young boy was taken and a drug user was left alone Left with absolutely nothing but the decisions that were her own So tonight if you’re watching, you’ll see her by the door With a box of broken memories lying on the floor |
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
OMG Jess!! This is my all time favorite poem of your's! its just so good.. and amazing.. this is going to my library.
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
sustained in a bliss of writing i cant explain. loved it. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thanks Guys.. Glad you liked.... |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
I always forget how amazing your words are untill i read them again- and then i always get my socks blown off . . . you are amazing. Feel better, i know that sounds lame- but it's all i got. Love you like a sister. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Once again, amazing write. I don't know why but your poems always tell so much and have so much emotion. You're gunna change the world some day (haha! right back at ya!!) Love you hun. Library, of course. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
W-O-W this is some of the best poetry I've read in a long time! The emotion comes through so well. Or not so well. Like Kate all I have is "feel better" lol not good enough but no words ever are. "And the sky...the sky became...PINK!!!" (Seusical the Musical) |
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