You can`t break me (stronger than ever)

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Teen Poetry #8

You can`t break me (stronger than ever)

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

0 posted 2008-05-31 06:15 AM

You can`t break me...
Hey girl, I am stronger than you,
you can`t change me !
I think my own thoughts,
I say what I mean,
I live with no losts,
and now, I sing:
...You have no ambition,
you have no class,
I will not see you here?
- I could care less!

I don`t need
a friend like you,
there are betters,
that`s for sure !
These words were "thanks"
for all I`ve done,
for your sorry is late,
I am gone...

You can`t tell me
what should I do,
Just look at you:
-you`re a tipical fool!
You cannot judge me,
cause I am better,
you cannot face me?
See ya later!

You have no courage
to speak your way,
only you care
what others will say.
But I live just for me,
like you see I am free.
Sometimes I laugh,
sometimes I cry,
I show my feelings, I never lie...
You may no like me,
the problem is yours,
Will I listen to you?
NO, of course!

The only one broken
I know is you,
but do what they
tell you to do.
Between us, is nothing to say,
you do what they tell you,
but I`ll go my way!

(to one selfish person, who is thinking that is center of the world, but actually, she is nothing)

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-31 10:05 AM

Wow I love this poem! I know how you feel... "Don't let the world change you, You change the world." This is going in my Library. Great work!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-06-02 01:29 AM

I love this, great work

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

3 posted 2008-07-02 03:45 PM

But, she can`t understand what`s friendship, love and trust....

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

4 posted 2008-07-03 06:23 PM

Well then maybe she should learn what friendship, love and trust are before you award her with yours. Great write by the way.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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