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Teen Poetry #8

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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-05-25 09:27 PM

A diary of emotions,
a map of your heart.
We put it all together
so we dont fall apart.
You can't read my mind,
so don't try it here.
I'm not ready to show you,
maybe in a few years.
Once all this is past,
once I can live.
Just wait untill then,
too see what you don't need.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

1 posted 2008-05-25 10:32 PM

hmm..this could be a good rap song
but i liked it! ^^

~Savana

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-26 11:21 AM

This is good. As for the title I'd call it "Diary of my Heart"

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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