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My brand new game |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
The merry go round the dolls and the toys the giggles and cheers..now its just fear built upon fear its self, were has all those good days gone were have all those oh so presious memmoris gone, now theres boys and cloths, make-up covering our every mistake, make-up covering our natural and inner beuty.. i'v botteled so much up i'v caged so much in and now I just want to expode and sit here and cry. Tears and tears no more can I hold but treusures untold, no more can these two messed up teens fight and bicker, now I just want to grasp you in a hold and make sure you know I dont mean to hurt you but emotions run wild I just need awhile to take this all in to let out my anger my hate and my fear to take in some love and enjoy what i'v got. I'm done playing my game, i'm done guessing and choosing. I'm done running in circules and chasing my tale. Its time to start a whole new deck a game of cards that doesn't have anything but me and you to choose. No queens and no kings no competition to uphold. *-crazycece-* |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
wow this is amZING!! love it ...library JJ |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow I agree with JJ. This is just amazing! I love the metaphores you used in this. Great work! ~Zach~ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
W-O-W "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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