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0 posted 2008-05-19 06:12 PM


I sort of went off of my rhyming scheme here. Enjoy!
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Holding on to whats left of me
Picking up the broken glass of my fragile heart.
Holding on to life and the moment.
Never to tear myself apart.

I'll hold on to my memories of you.
For all of eternity and forever more.
Slowly drifting from you
Hopeing and wishing that one day my heart will once soar.

Finding my way along the path.
holding my heart, bloody but cold.
never to trust again because of your wrath.
Trying to gain back my courage, to be once again bold.

I'll try not to cry.
I'll hold back my fears.
But I'll say, "I'm okay" just so you don't see my lie.
And let drip my tears.

Again at the begining, picking up the shards
Once more i'll taped up my sorrows, Never wanting to cry.
Try not to miss me for I'm leaving tomarrow.
I'm tired of being here. needing to lie.

Since you'll never listen, I just won't try.
I'll be gone tomarrow.. Hoping to never come back.
I don't want to be here. Don't try to lie.
Don't try to pity me or beg me to stay. Your honesty is what lacks.


© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-05-22 05:12 PM


Wow its been sometime. And no comments I see.

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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2 posted 2008-05-22 07:43 PM


Well I read it before and just didn't have anything to say. ....but now (my brain works in steps) I have one word for you. Clever.

            {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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3 posted 2008-05-22 10:14 PM


Hey, PIP didn't work for a week on my computer!  I would have commented before but I couldn't!  Now you're accusing me!  Ah, how shameful for me.  Oh well!  It's a really good poem Zach, like I said on msn already!  Keep on writing, you won't regret it.  You should write some more lullabies!!  You're very good at those!!  I put the one you wrote for me up on my wall!!  Haha!  Talk to you later Zach.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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