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Teen Poetry #8

Stormy, cloud eyes

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-05-16 07:04 PM

Stormy gray eyes
Cute button nose.
How can i see past all the lies?
You spit like venom and all is known...

That you were the one to hide
Say "your sorry" do whatever that please
But your ignoring what you feel inside
Please..I'm here on my knee

How can you reject me?
I did all that you need
You don't look at me the same way.. just leave me be
Don't try to lie; spread evil seed

I just wanna be with you
Why can't you see?
The stormy, cloud eyes.. just do what you do
I don't wanna be apart of your mind games.. just go! Please leave!

Be blind with your eyes.
And cute blond hair
Here i'll lay crying.. left to my demise
I'm left to be vulnarable.. just too bare

I open my heart
To let you in
I'll never be the part
That kept you.. but you sinned

I'm done with your so called "morals"
I'm threw with your lies.
Heart dead like coral
left to a demise..

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

1 posted 2008-05-18 02:15 AM

another great poem Zach, i know how you feel

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-18 03:53 PM

Thanks for a while there i thought that no body liked my poem lol.. but you proved me wrong i'm glad you enjoyed it.

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

3 posted 2008-05-25 06:47 PM

Great poem, once again. It really seems to speak to me in a way others don't. It's complicated to say, but I'm sure you get it. Anyway, keep it up!

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~*Julianna*~

"When life gives you lemons...alter their DNA and make SUPER LEMONS!!!"

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