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Romantic
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love

0 posted 2008-05-09 10:21 AM

Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
With all my heart,
I cherish you.
You make me feel happy,
Even when I am down.
To me your worth my life,
Because without you in it,
It would not be worth living.
I love you and I cherish you,
And I will always treat you right.
So on this day i would like to say,
"Kellie I love you, With all my heart!"

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

Unfortunate Disaster
Junior Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 17
Australia

1 posted 2008-05-09 10:46 AM

omg.... your so sweet!
eeeeek!
behave yourself lol!!!
your so talented....
which is so unfair coz i suck lol...

Romantic
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love

2 posted 2008-05-09 10:47 AM

you dont suck your poems are as good if not better then mine

Unfortunate Disaster
Junior Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 17
Australia

3 posted 2008-05-09 11:34 AM

no true....
your so much better than me!!!
i love your poetry!

xx

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

4 posted 2008-05-09 07:09 PM

nice write really interesting sry i am not able to say much just not in a lovy mood sry.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-05-09 07:20 PM

Nice write!

JJ

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

6 posted 2008-05-09 08:36 PM

Awe Nice one..
You really aren't afraid to show your emotions. (thats a good things) lol
This is a really good poem!
And i can't wait to see more from you..
And from one dude to another.. Your pretty good at writing.

Well i gtg. Keep up the writing

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

7 posted 2008-05-11 01:50 AM

wow Mark!!!!! its been so long since i read a poem by you you disappeared for awhile... so im guessing you got the girl??
Krysti

Romantic
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love

8 posted 2008-05-11 01:52 AM

yeah its been a while, i guess you could say i did but its a long story

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

pipgurl_95
New Member

since 2008-05-11

Posts 8
Michigan

9 posted 2008-05-11 06:21 PM

nice write...soo deep...good job

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