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krad008
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since 2008-02-20
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0 posted 2008-05-05 04:02 PM



He's one of my friends
I think he will treat  you well
No I no he will treat you well
He's right for you
I saw a picture of you two together at a game
You guys look sweet
I
I'll always think of you, but your with a good guy
He'll treat you with all the respect you deserve
I saw  you smiling with him today

I
I havnt seen you that happy for awhile
Just to see you that happy
Makes feel happy for you
I no were both always gonna wonder.......

Im willing to bet you two last a long time
So ill wander around
Looking for someone to fill my emptiness
Right now im deeply lost
I just need someone
Someone to hold on to
Someone to show off

Maybe in the future
Maybe in the future
Who ever you are..........

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Loruh
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since 2008-05-05
Posts 5

1 posted 2008-05-05 08:16 PM


That's good. I can see how you feel when I read it.
Tripp'ncutie
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since 2008-05-05
Posts 73
minnasota
2 posted 2008-05-06 08:57 AM


aww that was sooo sweet yes maybe in the future. for now uhtil then, just keep walking forward.
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