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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-05-02 07:03 PM



here i am and its been too long
i still cant seem to get the concept of right and wrong
i still dont know whats going on
im here for the ride

what will i do
what will i be
when a diffrent face
stares back at me

in a diffrent light
this could be just like
a world of black and white

its been too long but im here right now
i dont know what to say when your staring me down
so i guess i wont speak and keep my eyes on the ground


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Tripp'ncutie
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since 2008-05-05
Posts 73
minnasota
1 posted 2008-05-08 09:47 AM


putting your heart on your sleave? i can realate though nice write. keep it up!
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since 2008-01-31
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2 posted 2008-05-08 04:15 PM


Wow i know how you feel dude. Great write!!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Clockwork_Orange
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Space Camp, IN
3 posted 2008-05-08 09:25 PM


you guys rock hardcore! thanks for reading!
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