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Teen Poetry #8

cut all ties

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-05-02 07:03 PM

here i am and its been too long
i still cant seem to get the concept of right and wrong
i still dont know whats going on
im here for the ride

what will i do
what will i be
when a diffrent face
stares back at me

in a diffrent light
this could be just like
a world of black and white

its been too long but im here right now
i dont know what to say when your staring me down
so i guess i wont speak and keep my eyes on the ground

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

1 posted 2008-05-08 09:47 AM

putting your heart on your sleave? i can realate though nice write. keep it up!

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-08 04:15 PM

Wow i know how you feel dude. Great write!!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

3 posted 2008-05-08 09:25 PM

you guys rock hardcore! thanks for reading!

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