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0 posted 2008-04-30 05:14 PM


Well since everyone here is doing duets. I thought i might as one do one with an amazing poet. This poem was writin with the help of shatter-smiles(Tj). This poem so far is my favorite. It would of been just another boring poem if i wrote it by myself... So in otherwords I like to say a BIG THANK YOU to Tj. Her amazing talent will surely lighten the world. So THANK YOU!!!

(Note to Tori: Hey Tori,
I forgot to ask what title you wanted to give this master piece last night on MSN. So i just added a title. If you want to change it, its fine by me. Just let me know what to.
Have a great day!
~Zach~)
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Tell me Broken Angel...


What does it feel like to drown in your sorrow?
To feel your nothing but a wisp of imagenary shadow.
Floating in the cloud of nothingness and dispair.
Letting the wind brush your fears and to dry your subtle tears.
While gray shadows haunt, tornment, and destroy, you're left on this earth as nothing but a blood broken angel.
Broken and cold, alone in the dark
Waiting for your beating heart to stop
In this mist of confusion and love.
Laying on the frosen ground, fear envelops her soul.
With no one to care, no one to hold, she'll lie on this ground alone.
This broken angel torn apart.
From where she use to fly.
Blood soaked wings, but here she lies.
Along on the ground. Heart torn in two.
Living on the lie that she was alone

dark angel

~Zach~



© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-04-30 05:33 PM


Creative...as usual.

    {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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2 posted 2008-04-30 08:31 PM


the work of 2 great writers coming together, totally awesome
Earl Robertson
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3 posted 2008-04-30 11:17 PM


WOW! great work! library difinatly!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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4 posted 2008-05-01 08:41 AM


Hey Zach!  Awesome work we did here, hey?  It was fun writing a duet with you, we should do it again sometime.  Plus, people need to be writing some more duets, they seem to be relentlessly fading.  Anyway, I appreaciate the comments guys.  Thanx!

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

PAiGEY
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victooriaa
5 posted 2008-05-01 09:57 PM


So creative.
So beautiful.  


eternally_singing
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6 posted 2008-05-02 07:14 PM


Spectacular

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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7 posted 2008-05-06 02:49 PM


Beautiful seems to be an utterly imperfect word for this.

I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . .

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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8 posted 2008-05-12 06:26 PM


Tori, Zach, you guys outdid yourselves. This poem says alot of heart-felt words. The words are dripping with the deepness I feel. Great write, keep it up! Oh, and its in my Library, totally.

~*Julianna*~

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