Teen Poetry #8 |
Imaginary Tales |
XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
~ this is a pretty bad poem, I really only wrote it out of boredom... Cold and frozen in regret. Sitting by myself, and trying to forget. Where warm tears fall, there's a hand in mine; an imaginary friend who has always been kind. With wings of a marnoch and teeth like a shark, my only comfort sits with me and my falling tears. Bark covered arms and eye's of only white, she's put me under her spell of truth and tricks me in delight. {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Nice this is pretty creative write and it did somewhat ryhmed. but i think there was like one part that didn't though. And you never know some words that come out of boredum might be pretty good. Great write!! ~Zach~ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
LOL great poem! "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
LOVED IT! it was very creative and I just tottaly understood it. ENJOYED! |
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