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Two poems |
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spiderilia Junior Member
since 2008-04-24
Posts 21Israel |
hi all... hope some of you will be able to relate to those... I know that the topic is kind of the same but juxt couldn't decide which oe is better so I post them both... I remember I remember the era before thinking about you for the first time. I remember the era before putting frustration of mine, in a rhyme I remeber that era, every day was the same I was dreaming of money I was dreaming of fame like a shadow you came that in breath disappier all my inside had frozen you have filled me with fear I was thinking about you I did not lose your sight I was cryin of shame I was crying at night All my life had just fallen what I thought wasn't true only thing still have meanin for me only one, this is you... Moment who am I to be rude? who am I to complane? just broken sad man, who was dreaming, in vain why did you gave me hope? why the hell you're so cruel? maybe there is no love? to brake hearts is your rule I had you for a moment that had passed, so Im sad just a breath taking moment happiest moment I've had... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Honestly I do't think these two poems are much alike. I like the first one is better. Great write anyway!! ~Zach~ |
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