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Teen Poetry #8

Laying Softly Next To You

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-04-26 02:29 PM

Softly Next To You
I can feel your body slowly relax as you lay next to me.
The subtle warmth of your hand in mine,
I can feel the moment start to build.
I shift closer towards your chest
as you wrap your arms around my waist.
Your lips deep within my hair,
I can feel your soft breath
whisper its way into my heart.
The slow rising and falling
of your chest under my head
comforts me tonight;
it makes me feel safe.
Your arms still ‘round my waist,
your head moves downward and mine tilts up
just until our lips gently brush against each other.
That soft, subtle touch
suddenly turns into a deep rising passion
welling up inside us both.
There is no other place
I would rather be than here with you . . .
I love you.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-04-26 02:55 PM

WOW TJ, I loove this

its soo sweet

Krysti

reddevil013
Junior Member

since 2008-04-26

Posts 12
ON, Canada

2 posted 2008-04-26 11:23 PM

Wow... i couldnt help but picture myself there with tht special someone.
btw, i love ur signature

R.D

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

3 posted 2008-04-28 01:05 AM

omg this was beautiful!!! i loved it

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-04-30 05:32 PM

Wow Tj!!! This is simply beautiful!! reminds me of my old girlfriend. I love this!

~Zach~

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