The Frozen Tears Of A Forgotten Soul

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Teen Poetry #8

The Frozen Tears Of A Forgotten Soul

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-04-19 11:20 PM

~A duet with BrettK and I~

She can feel the wind slowly
brush her hair against the side
of her face.  She hears the faint
creaking of the metal chains drifting
back and forth in the roar
of the subtle breeze.  Why?, she cries out,
why?  Why did this happen,
why am I so alone?

This vague question fills her mind
as waves of despair envelop her heart.
Weights of sorrow bring down her
heart into a deep pool of crimson.
She’s choking now, drowning
in her own tears.

Collapsing on the frozen ground,
she stifles another icy breath.
Splayed across the ground,
she knows there’s nothing more to do.
She can feel her time getting shorter
as the time drags by.  As she hastily
gasps that one final breath, her vision
turns towards the lonely swing.  The last
muttered words out of her mouth;
“Sadness is like being on a swing,
with no one to push you...”

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

[This message has been edited by shattered-smiles (04-20-2008 09:54 AM).]

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-04-25 11:00 PM

I'm not sure I understand. But of course it's good all the same

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-04-26 12:53 PM

Yeah I'd have to agree with Emily. I'm sort of confused..

~Zach~

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

3 posted 2008-04-26 11:43 AM

It's not really supposed to be a poem that makes sense. It was fun to write so I wrote it. Not everything that I write is supposed to make sense to other people.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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