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Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-04-14 07:10 PM

There Once Was A Boy

I don’t know your story
But I will tell you mine
In the hope that comfort
Will come to you divine

There once was a boy
And he was in “love”
With a fable in his head
No olive branch or dove

Then he found the greatest love
That ever could be found
He made a sacred vow
To fly above the ground

Then he fell in love again
With a witch of flesh and blood
Good and great she may have been
But it dragged him through the mud

He’s lucky she never saw him
That broken she need not be
Or jealous of something
She never did see

Cruel she could have been
If she had ever seen
Dead and cold he could be now
Instead of standing keen

If this your story seems
Be sure you know your parts
Do not make my great mistakes,
Please heal these broken hearts

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-14 07:26 PM

good write!!

JJ

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-04-14 07:34 PM

Wow you explained my love life quiet well.. Bravo! lol.

~Zach~

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-04-15 05:01 PM

witch.. hmmm have you met my ex. nice write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2008-04-16 09:43 AM

ohhh Frank I love this sooooooo much!!!!!
Krysti

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

5 posted 2008-04-17 08:49 AM

Such an amazing poem, reading it was so smooth, it as just an all around amazing poem

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

6 posted 2008-04-18 07:30 PM

Wow Thank you guys!
And Zach you know your the third? fourth? person to say somthing like that? (Same to you wisdom although the number is higher for you...later post you know.) lol

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

7 posted 2008-04-19 05:44 PM

Frank, Feel better. I hope that you're doing better, oh Frank, What happened again- email me.

-A Worried Kate

ps it was great - the poem- i added it to my library,

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

8 posted 2008-04-21 11:44 AM

well written i love this

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

9 posted 2008-04-21 06:00 PM

great poem,
very original.
i enjoyed it alot, thank you.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

10 posted 2008-04-21 10:33 PM

great poem!!

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

11 posted 2008-04-21 10:50 PM

If this your story seems
Be sure you know your parts
Do not make my great mistakes,
Please heal these broken hearts
this was bomb. great write i loved it

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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