The Judgmental petals of Reality

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Teen Poetry #8

The Judgmental petals of Reality

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-04-11 07:54 PM

{}well according to shattered-smiles this poem makes sense..so here it is......~~}

Suppressed in this world
of judgmental flowers, no
where to turn in the dark
of wintry nights. Snowflakes
will freez on your petals,
stinging you with hatred.

In this world of judgmental
flowers, there is no escape
from the stare of reality.
We stand in this feild of
cement covered soil, freezing
in the judgment of snowfall
and freedom.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (04-12-2008 09:06 PM).]

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

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at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-11 09:45 PM

good write!!

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

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Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-04-11 09:58 PM

well of course this makes sence!! i can understand this perfectly. this is going in my library.. yes you heard right..library.. lol great write!!

~Zach~

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

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3 posted 2008-04-11 10:16 PM

i forgot to say before. i think "Judgemental flowers" is a good title.

~Zach~

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

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the last place on earth

4 posted 2008-04-12 10:51 AM

makes perfect sense to me, good write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

5 posted 2008-04-12 11:09 AM

Wow em.. Love this.. um Titles.. hmm how about
The Judgemental Petals Of Reality.
or
The Wilted Petals Of Life's Lonely Flower...

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

6 posted 2008-04-12 09:05 PM

YEAH! Jess...ur awesome. Thank you so much.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

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