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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! 
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do you take pride by wrecking my whole day since your here i guess you have somthing to say i dont want to hear it you can go die because i cant stand to see you here and listen to your lies this is just pathetic..... your just too synthetic |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
this is just pathetic..... your just too synthetic best lines for last ended this poem well liked this a little short but good... hunnie*  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
i loved the last lines. thanks for something real. i agree, a little longer "When you find that you have found yourself, you find that you won't have to look for much else." -Amanda Ann |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
it's a little short but it's still a very good "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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Twain_Crusador23 New Member
since 2006-12-08
Posts 5 |
You have a Titanic intellect in a world full of icebergs. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi Bryan, I loved this poem!~ I would be hard pressed to say that I would like it to be longer just because the message is so clear in how it is and when you draw the poem out sometimes you miss it. I wouldn't change a thing on this one; keep up the good writes  "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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