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alone...unfeeling |
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Sad_eyed_girl New Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 8 |
I sit here with my expressionless face. Im surronded by those who mean the most to me. But I dont feel a thing. Im not even happy. At home in my bed, I cry endlessly, for no appearent reason maybe its something deep inside. maybe the feelings I hide now there shouting out a cry HERE I AM STOP SHUTING ME OUT!!! for now ill ignore them pretend there not there. I'll fall asleep crying and pretend I dont care I'll wake in the morning, get dressed for school. I'll meet with my friends and pretend it's all kool |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
this basically explains the exact mood i had last night. great write. welcome and i hope to see more of your stuff |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
yes. this was truely awesome. good work. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome to Pip! What a sad heartfelt first post  I look forward to reading more from you. *Please check your email for a special greeting! |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
it was a fairly good poem but it didn't seem to fully flow all the way through |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Yeah I know how you feel, but I can tell you from experience that hiding and ignoring those feelings wont help. |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
This was really good... I often feel that way and it makes me crazy!!! Loved it!!! One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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