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23heavens
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since 2008-04-02
Posts 8
India

0 posted 2008-04-04 06:04 AM



Life is like a song we write
In our own tone and key,
Each life we touch reflects
A note that forms a melody
We choose the theme and chorus
Of the song to bear our name,
And each will have a special sound,
No two can be the same
Leave your mark...
Some shine and fade away
Others find a way to stay
Leaving their mark on sandy shores
The wave will fall and it will be no more
Yet what others carve on stone
Will in a million years into dust be torn
But within hearts that kindle love
He leaves a mark for eternity...

"Someones thinking of You"

© Copyright 2008 daryl emmanuel - All Rights Reserved
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-04-04 11:48 AM


nicely written i love the flow

JJ

Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
2 posted 2008-04-04 06:42 PM


very good. Love the read. beautiful song.
23heavens
New Member
since 2008-04-02
Posts 8
India
3 posted 2008-04-05 08:08 AM


ThankYou...!! Your apppreciation means a lot...

"Your not Alone"

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