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23heavens
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since 2008-04-02
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0 posted 2008-04-02 02:13 PM



    It had been 18 years,
    And yet it seemed so short...
    Had seen and done so much,
    So much that life had taught...

    Lost In the shadows I was
    In my own little world...
    Then things changed one day,
    And from the shadows came this gal...

    An Angel I met that day
    An Angel from up above...
    She showed me how to live again,
    To Smile, to laugh, to Love...

    And there I found a reason        
    A reason to Live again...
    She took away the Sorrows,
    And made me forget the Pain...

    Shes been there all along
    Catching me when I fall...
    In the starry sky at Nite,
    Shes the brightest of them all...

    18 long years had passed,
    Then someone changed my World...
    The Moon in my nite sky
    The Brightest, My Angel...!!!

    
                

"Someones thinking of You"

© Copyright 2008 daryl emmanuel - All Rights Reserved
hiddensmiles
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1 posted 2008-04-02 08:28 PM


Hey welcome too pip! goodwrite here! hopeing to read more!

JJ

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2008-04-04 03:39 AM


Oh wow!!! Daryl!!!! welcome to Passions i can tell already I am going to enjoy reading your poetry!! great poem! Love it
Krysti

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3 posted 2008-12-27 10:30 AM


nice 1, keep it up.......
Clockwork_Orange
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4 posted 2009-01-01 10:27 AM


hope to read more soon. this was great.
Falling rain
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5 posted 2009-01-01 12:38 PM


Nice work dude! Hope to see more from you! Welcome to Pip!

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

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