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ShawtySheFly
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since 2007-12-19
Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

0 posted 2008-04-02 11:53 AM


And i don't know what i would do
if he were to leave me here
i'd probably scream so loud the earth would move
i mean this guy is my world
i cry the tears he can't
because he's a man
and men don't cry
they are too busy being everything
Everything to a girl like me
They're mostly busy wasting energy
being the sun shining down on thee
Let me get this point to you
he's not my long lost love
but he's the one man in my the life
the one i call Grampa, yeah, i spell grandpa different
I take out the D, replace the N with a M
but don't take time to check my grammar
take time to be there for me when he does leave
prevent me from causing a flood w/ my tears
& let me know it's ok to smile cause he'll be w/ the angels


Okay....so this is "My Everything" recently i've come to find out my grampa may not be here longer and he is really the only man i truely love besides my father and godfather....well anyway this is it. The one thing on my mind lately.

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

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fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

1 posted 2008-04-02 01:22 PM


The thought of loosing someone special must be really hard but in life all we can do is prepare our selves for the inevitable of life but the best thing for you is to enjoy your gramps as much as possible and let him know you love him. my heart goes out to you for going through this hard time...and nice write.
ShawtySheFly
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since 2007-12-19
Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)
2 posted 2008-04-03 11:13 AM


Thank you for the reply i really appreciate your feedback and promise me i show to him i love him lots =) i'm livin our relationship to the fullest but he's losing eyisight too so it's gettin hard but thank you very very much for this

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

3 posted 2008-04-03 12:22 PM


Your welcome..oh and take lots and lots of pictures cuz pics last a life time. I did that with someone who was special to me but I would have to force a smile on his face so most of my pics include me trying to make him laugh so now that he's gone these pics soothe my aching heart and comfort my thoughts with a smile...hope everything is the same with you..
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
4 posted 2008-04-04 12:39 PM


nice write. you hold on

JJ

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