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rockangel_gv
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since 2008-03-29
Posts 43


0 posted 2008-04-01 10:59 AM



I`ve lived in a dream,
belived in you,
for you always won,
my words were true,
but you...

You broke my heart,
you let me down,
and just when she left you,
you came around,
came to me
again and again....
asking to forgive you,
but I need to...

I need to left this place,
need to forget and erase
you from my heart,
you`ll never be part
of me...

I will go
somewhere to find a love,
not at all false words and hope,
Last word - goodbye
I know you good
baby don`t cry.

I will be
Somewhere that you are not,
far from here, but loving you a lot...
``Don`t leave, be mine``
all you sais is lie!

I`ll move on,
don`t turn back...
don`t look at me...
I will go like I never knew you...

It will be hard
but I know I could
to forget me baby...
I know you would.
Stay here, I`ll go
you already know...

I will start new life,
easy and slow,
will be happy far from you,
far away from all you do...



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Brian23
Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73
Belfast, Ireland
1 posted 2008-04-01 11:26 AM


Good poem and I can relate to it.
rockangel_gv
Junior Member
since 2008-03-29
Posts 43

2 posted 2008-04-01 11:35 AM


thanks
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-04-01 04:22 PM


great poem. you be strong! you will find someone better...

JJ

masksrlife
Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
4 posted 2008-04-01 04:31 PM


I agree with JJ be strong you'll find somone better. I know how you feel exept i'v been at the other end. He dumped me so I went running back to my ex. He helped me through. He knew the truth, but i know he deserved better so know were done tottaly. And the worst thing is were not even friends any more. It sucks but i guess i deserved it.

*crazycece*

rockangel_gv
Junior Member
since 2008-03-29
Posts 43

5 posted 2008-04-01 05:13 PM


thanks, I think you are right.
it means a lot to me

wisdomofthesword
Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
6 posted 2008-04-01 07:14 PM


great poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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